The sky will cry again today.
Just as it has all week.
Raining sad tears upon my cheek.
These dark clouds block the light
tempering the dawn of mornings bright.
I cast my gaze toward the sun.
or, where there should be one.
I cannot see it just now
But it rises without me anyhow.
I see the light of day
defused, subtle, it shows the way
out of the darkness and troubles
and warms those swimming in struggle.
should we cast our gaze east
to those so desperately needing relief
I hope we can give courage
and strength and help to nourish
the left behind, and those dispossessed
they are weary and needing rest.
Sound the call! Beat the Drum!
Rally the efforts of Every One.
For every Cause, there is need.
Children, animals, many mouths to feed.
blankets, clothes, shoes and medical care
money, time, love, hopes and prayers.
and tomorrow the sun will rise
bringing new hope to tired eyes.
Touching images of loss and coming together in Japan: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0ESjP_asq0A
This Six Word Friday post is inspired by Melissa at Makingthingsup.com. To read other stories of hope and maybe add your own go here. Make sure you leave a comment: For every comment left on this post Melissa and her family will make a donation to Save The Children to help with the relief efforts in Japan.
Mar 18, 2011 @ 10:18:21
hopeful hope entry, yes, tomorrow will have sun light and
smiles…
well penned,
Here is My Entry, Thanks for reading!
Mar 18, 2011 @ 12:45:47
thank you very much
Mar 18, 2011 @ 11:40:00
A lovely representation of hope, Brook. Thanks!
Mar 18, 2011 @ 12:44:50
thank you
Mar 18, 2011 @ 12:27:29
“and tomorrow the sun will rise
bringing new hope to tired eyes.”
Beautiful!
Mar 18, 2011 @ 12:44:32
thanks
Mar 18, 2011 @ 12:39:01
A lovely six word, Brook. “bringing new hope to tired eyes”
Mar 18, 2011 @ 13:29:17
Hope always rises. It always will.
Not always soon enough, but soon.
Mar 18, 2011 @ 13:34:08
I’ve often felt in these sorts of bad times, that you can’t really start the healing until the event(s) over. Until then it’s just triage, not real healing. The ongoing nature of the nuclear problem in addition to everything else is not allowing the real healing and hoping to begin yet.
Mar 18, 2011 @ 15:26:40
Beautiful ending. And on a day like today, I can relate to looking at the sun, or where I hope there would be one.
A passionate post. Well done, Brook. Thanks for extending the hopeful vibes.
Mar 18, 2011 @ 15:33:46
Thank you, Belinda.
Mar 18, 2011 @ 16:54:09
Brook, There is much food for thought in this beautiful poem. I came away from reading it with renewed HOPE.
Thanks and Namaste……….cj
Mar 18, 2011 @ 17:28:02
Thanks, that’s the plan 🙂
Mar 18, 2011 @ 21:37:04
So beautiful….and I loved that you ended with a hopeful feeling.
“Should we cast our eyes east…To those so desperately in need.”
So many of our eyes are turned east right now….hope keeps us moving forward to help.
Mar 19, 2011 @ 09:12:11
Thank you so very much. Yes, keep moving forward with hope!
Mar 19, 2011 @ 11:10:06
Hope, like the sun, is there even if we cannot see it through our tears, sorrow. Thanks for reminding us of this.
Mar 19, 2011 @ 11:14:04
Thanks, I loved your thread post, too.
Mar 21, 2011 @ 08:17:37
love your work.
join us today, share 1 to 3 poems as first time participant, welcome and have fun.
Mar 26, 2011 @ 17:08:23
you used to attend poets rally?
wow..found you on week 20 award list..
wishing you the best.
share one piece with us today, make more friends…
bless you.
xx