Dear Mama, I wish you knew
that you are kept safe, warm
in the chambers of my heart.
Dear Mama, I wish you knew,
as I am starting to learn,
that you were enough. More than.
Dear Mama, I wish you could
have kept them at bay again.
Like you had managed to before.
Dear Mama, I hope you know
how very much you are missed
and loved.
and loved.
and missed.
I’ve kept you long enough. Go see MELISSA for more six word fun.
May 27, 2011 @ 07:39:02
A very powerful piece! Succinct. Poignant.
🙂
May 27, 2011 @ 07:40:38
thank you very much.
May 27, 2011 @ 08:27:39
Oh wow, this made me very very sad. I think I know what you were alluding to, and it touched a little close to home. Oh, sad!
May 27, 2011 @ 09:00:44
yeah. sad.
I have all my posts about my mom in the MOM category if you want some more sad. 😐 and more detailed. (not specifics, just detailed)
May 27, 2011 @ 09:14:06
This rips at my heart.
I bet she knows.
May 27, 2011 @ 09:16:10
I believe she does. I must.
May 27, 2011 @ 09:48:19
This makes me sad.
I bet she knows!
May 27, 2011 @ 10:04:20
yeah, me too. very sad.
I hope so. and believe so.
May 27, 2011 @ 10:04:57
This is stunningly, achingly beautiful.
May 27, 2011 @ 10:06:19
wow. thank you.
May 27, 2011 @ 10:09:16
I bet she knows. 🙂
May 27, 2011 @ 14:57:27
I think so, too. 🙂
May 27, 2011 @ 16:30:31
Full of tenderness. Nothing could honor her more than to be cherished by you like this. Lovely.
May 27, 2011 @ 16:33:55
thank you.
that is my hope.
May 27, 2011 @ 17:08:22
You’ll keep her always. She knows.
May 27, 2011 @ 17:12:34
Cannot believe anything different than that.
May 27, 2011 @ 19:18:37
You know and so does she. Beautiful.
May 28, 2011 @ 01:04:56
thank you
May 29, 2011 @ 09:48:41
Beautiful and sad.
May 29, 2011 @ 10:56:23
thank you. yes, sad.