We move together. Slow, quick, quick.
My hand in yours. You lead.
I follow, but you cannot lead
without my agreeing to the steps.
You pose a question in movement.
I answer with a corresponding motion.
In this way we conversate together.
You hold me close, but still
allow me room to spin freely.
We step, step, glide, pivot, turn
across the dance floor in harmony.
Weaving a path safely through, around.
You clasp my hand in yours.
The intention of your body funnelled
through your arms, telegraphed through fingers,
guiding us to the music’s rhythm.
My hand rests lightly in yours.
Neither’s hand clutches. They need space.
Tethered together by choice, by action.
A too firm grip ruins flow.
A too weak hold can’t follow.
“Spaghetti arms” can’t maintain a conversation.
The delicate balance between strong and soft
is navigated step by step, collaboratively.
Honey, would you care to dance?
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Sep 09, 2011 @ 11:54:55
wow Brook…what a nice write 🙂 I really enjoyed it.
Sep 09, 2011 @ 11:59:56
thanks. It was fun to write. 😀
Sep 09, 2011 @ 13:07:56
In tango as in life, no?
🙂
Ah, I wish I could dance…
Sep 09, 2011 @ 13:16:34
As Antonio Banderas’ character in Take the Lead says, “If you can walk, you can dance.”
Sep 09, 2011 @ 16:29:16
Another spell-binding love poem. Your concrete images make this piece very visual, and I could feel the movements on the dance floor. This is wonderful!
Namaste……….cj
Sep 09, 2011 @ 17:40:02
Thank you so much. 🙂
Sep 09, 2011 @ 17:33:52
Beautiful! Such a vivid picture of moving together ~ the give and take of a partner’s dance!
Sep 09, 2011 @ 17:42:04
Thank you. That’s what it’s all about, isn’t it?
Sep 09, 2011 @ 18:32:12
Well done!
Sep 09, 2011 @ 18:37:46
thank you! 😀
Sep 09, 2011 @ 18:33:24
The Imagery is beautiful! I laughed when I got to the line about ‘spaghetti arms’
Sep 09, 2011 @ 18:38:55
I figured that was a concise way to explain it 😀 and thanks!
Sep 11, 2011 @ 18:15:56
I enjoyed reading this poem immensely – thank you!
As Melissa said – ‘as in tango as in life.’ So true.
Sep 11, 2011 @ 21:21:44
Yep, totally. Thanks ♥