Six Word Friday: Captive

I am captivated by your words

Slowly drawn in by your lines

by the careful crafting of sentences

and beautifully glimmering hand-turned phrases.

I am mesmerized by your story

hooked on every well baited line

reeled in, powerless against your pull

caught, ensnared, trapped by your metaphor

and furthermore, similarly, by your simile

at the end I am yours

gasping for air on the shore

dying, and still only wanting more

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4 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. iseeyoulookingatme
    Sep 14, 2012 @ 13:35:10

    I want to meet this person you are drawn in by. Captivated!

    Reply

  2. Adrienne
    Sep 17, 2012 @ 06:30:31

    So creative! And absolutely gives me that feeling I get when I’m drowning in a good book!

    Reply

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